Another quick poem aha?

As you said, it needs a little bit of work.... But, it's good! It's damn good! (Sorry, about the cussing.) You have some real talent. Just some of the lines I like are... "timeless dignity. Searching for the reasons you weep. I ponder the secrets you keep." I love, "Singing your private prayer." I like, "Watched humanity fall..." Fail might be a better word, as we haven't fallen quite yet. (Unless, you meant the Garden of Eden.) But, we're getting close. I hope I'm lucky enough to see it when it's finished. Great job!